Friday, November 18, 2011

Thesis

For a government to avoid the tyrant, that government must legislate morality and educate every individual so that each person may make contributions to the marketplace of ideas.

2 comments:

  1. I really like this, Maggie, especially that you make education mandatory and not just contributions to the marketplace of ideas. Go redheads!
    Some questions to maybe consider:
    Will governments also avoid the tyranny of the majority this way, as well as the single tyrant? Does education necessarily lead to morality-- what happens if everyone is educated but the majority still chooses to oppress the minority?

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  2. I really like this! It's strong and definite, not wishy-washy like thesis's often can be.

    I would re-word the first clause, though.

    Also, be sure to explain how legislating morality isn't indoctrinating people-- how people really are free to think what they want so that they can participate in the marketplace of ideas.

    Should be a great paper!

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